必修第二册Unit1 Lights, camera, action!主题写作评价作业
【当日巩固】 一、 假如你是李华，你校英文报要评选本年度"最美中学生(The Most Qualified Student）”。请你用英语给校英语编辑 Johnny 写一封推荐信。 要点如下：1. 被推荐人的基本信息；2. 说明推荐理由。 注意： 1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Step 1句子翻译 1. 我写信是为了推荐我的班长，11年级3班的杨宁，为本学年“最合格的学生”。 _____________________________, Yang Ning in Class 3, Grade 11, for “The Most Qualified Student” of this school year. 2. 在我看来，杨宁同学具备诸多出众的品质。 In my opinion, Yang Ning possesses exceptional qualities ________________________。 3. 首先，在学业方面，她是一名全能型学生，各科成绩都很优异。 Firstly, _________________ academic performance, she is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects. 4. 此外，她积极参加各类活动，展现出了出色的组织能力。 Moreover, ______________________________, she has displayed outstanding organizational skills. 5. 更重要的是，她以善良、富有同情心和乐于助人而闻名。 _________________________, she__________________ her kindness, compassion, and willingness to help others. 6. 我真心希望您能考虑我的推荐。 I do hope you can ___________________________________. Step 2 连句成篇 Dear Johnny, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 二、 假定你是高一新生李华，得知你的美国笔友Jack暑假要来中国旅游，他对中国的园林很感兴趣。请你根据以下要点，给他写一封电子邮件。 内容包括： 1.欢迎他来中国游玩； 2.推荐苏州的留园，设计独特，景致优美； 3.提出可以陪他游览一天。 注意：1.词数80左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Step 1 自我写作 Dear Jack, Delighted to know that you are fascinated by classical Chinese gardens, I am writing to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely, Li Hua Step 2 作文评价 1. 篇章结构：书信格式、合理分段 2. 内容要点：涵盖要点、没有遗漏 3. 语言表达：词汇得体、语法正确 Step 3 升格写作 Dear Jack, Delighted to know that you are fascinated by classical Chinese gardens, I am writing to ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【本周巩固】 1. 了解掌握推荐信的基本格式和框架 2. 作文素材本整理：关于最美中学生的推荐信、关于中国园林的推荐信。 3. 其它内容回顾 【本月巩固】 答案： 一、 Dear Johnny, I’m writing to recommend my monitor, Yang Ning in Class 3, Grade 11, for “The Most Qualified Student” of this school year. In my opinion, Yang Ning possesses exceptional qualities that make her stand out. Firstly, in terms of academic performance, she is an all-around student with excellent grades in all subjects. Moreover, actively participating in various activities, she has displayed outstanding organizational skills. More importantly, she is known for her kindness, compassion, and willingness to help others. For example, she has contributed countless hours to community service projects over the past few years. I do hope you can take my recommendation into account. Yours， Li Hua 二、 Dear Jack, I’m delighted to know you will spend your summer holiday in China. Considering you are fascinated by classical Chinese gardens, I'm writing to introduce the Lingering Garden to you. The Lingering Garden, located in Suzhou, is one of the “Four Famous Classic Gardens” in China. There, not only can you admire its amazing architecture, but you can also enjoy the natural landscapes within limited space. Besides, a visit to the garden will provide you with insights into Chinese culture, for it’s design reflects the principles of balance, harmony, and symbolism deeply rooted in Chinese tradition. I’d like to accompany you as your tour guide for a day. Yours, Li Hua |