必修第一册Unit 3 Getting along with others主题写作评价作业主备：顾清雯 校对：张妮 审核：闻宇青 （江苏省仪征中学） 【当日巩固】 一、 假如你是李华，你的同学Lucy发现被好朋友欺骗了，很是苦恼，不知道还该不该继续她们的友谊。于是她向你询问“什么是真正的朋友？”，请你根据下面的提示给她写一封电子邮件。内容包含： 1. 真正朋友的特点是：…… 2. 学着去了解别人，找到真正的好朋友； 3. 表达祝愿。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Step 1句子翻译 1. 在做决定前， 你最好仔细思考整件事情。 Before ___________________________, you’d better ___________________________. 2.如果你的朋友确实故意背叛你，那么到了你该放弃你的友谊了。 If your friend really tricked you _________________, it’s time for you to _________________ your friendship. 3. 首先，一个好的朋友是你可以信任的人。 ___________________________, a good friend is a person you can trust. 4. 其次，当你陷入麻烦，你的帮助将会帮助你。 Secondly, when you ______________________, your friend will try to ______________________. 5. 无论你是悲伤还是孤单，他/她都愿意陪伴你。 ______________________________________________________, he/she is willing to spare some time to _____________________. Step 2 连句成篇 Dear Lucy, _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 二、 假定你是某国际学校的一名学生。这周末你和朋友李华一起去爬山。请你用英语写一篇日记，记录爬山过程中一件令你印象深刻的事情，并谈一谈感受。 注意：1. 词数100左右； 2. 日记的格式已为你写好，但不计入总词数。 Step 1 自我写作 15 October Dear Diary, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Step 2 作文评价 1. 篇章结构：日记格式、合理分段 2. 内容要点：涵盖要点、没有遗漏 3. 语言表达：词汇得体、语法正确 Step 3 升格写作 15 October Dear Diary, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【本周巩固】 1. 了解掌握日记的基本格式和框架 2. 作文素材本整理：关于友谊的日记、关于个人经历的日记。 3. 其它内容回顾 【本月巩固】 答案： 一、 Dear Lucy, I’m sorry to hear that your best friend has tricked you. I’d like to offer you some advice. Before making a decision, you’d better think the whole thing through. If your friend really tricked you on purpose, it’s time for you to let go of your friendship. First of all, a good friend is a person you can trust. Secondly, when you get into trouble, your friend will try to help you out. That is, a good friend should be helpful. Thirdly, a good friend should be understanding. Whenever you feel sad or lonely, he/she is willing to spare some time to keep you company. I hope that you will find a truly good friend, who will also value you very much. Yours, Li Hua 二、 15 October Dear Diary, This weekend, my friend Li Hua and I went for a hike in the nearby mountain. Li Hua loves climbing mountains and he has a lot of experience but I'm new to this activity. I climbed very slowly and got tired easily, but Li Hua always waited for and encouraged me. When I was tripped by a rock, Li Hua ran to me quickly and held me. Thanks to him, I didn't fall down. I was very touched. From this experience, I've learned that climbing a mountain with friends is not about reaching the top, but about helping each other along the way. He reminded me of the meaning of friendship and mutual support. 本写作任务要求写一篇日记，属于应用文。日记通常由两部分组成，即书端和正文。书端专门用来记录写日记时的日期和天气情况。通常，正文上方的左边（顶格）是日期，右边是当天的天气情况（可省略）。日记的正文是日记的主要部分，本写作的正文属于叙事性记叙文。我们以按事件发生的先后顺序来展开叙述，最后说明自己的感受。日记常用第一人称，当谈及其他对象时可根据实际情况采用相应的人称。由于记载的内容通常已经发生，故多用过去时态。 |