必修第一册Unit 1 Back to school主题写作

一、学习目标

1．Talk about different aspects of starting a new school club.

2．Write a proposal for a new school club.

二、学习过程

【课前先学】

1. What should be included in the proposal?

2. Suppose you are given a chance, what club would you like to start?

3. How can you write a good proposal?

项目1：A new school club

【问题导学】

Suppose you are given a chance, what club would you like to start?

【合作研学】

任务一：In groups, talk about starting a new school club.

types

aims

activities

materials

ways

任务二：Use the following ideas and expressions to talk about plans.

l We'd like to start a ... club in order to .../so that...

l We plan to ... by ...

l Our plan for a ... club needs/requires...

l Our club aims to/is intended to ...

Example:

A: I'd like to start a film club so that students can learn more about films and film-making.

B: Great idea! What's the plan for each meeting?

项目2：Writing the proposal

【问题导学】

What are the text type, structure and language related to a proposal?

【合作研学】

任务一：Learning about the text type

1. What is a proposal?

2. What is the purpose of a proposal?

任务二：Learning about the structure

It is important to separate different types of information to make your proposal easy to read.  (e.g. page 9 part B)

任务三：Learning about the language

1. Formal language

2. Important and brief information

Some phrases:

in my opinion  在我看来

from my perspective  从我的角度

it is advisable to  做……是明智的

had better (not) do  最好（不）做

make a suggestion  提出建议

take … into consideration/account  考虑到

with regard to  关于

in terms of  就……而言

solve the problem  解决问题

improve the situation  改善情况

take measures  采取措施

enhance the ability  提高能力

as follows  如下

任务四：Writing and checking

Dear headmaster,

I want to start a club, which is called……… The club's leader is……… The club members will meet ……..time….....place……

The purpose of our club is to…………………...We will …activities……

I am looking forward to your agreement.

Yours sincerely

Name

常用表达

写一封建议信

第一段：开门见山，表明写作意图，引出主题

1. __________________________________________(我写信是为了表达我对…的一些看法) the further improvement of the hotel _________________________________(以吸引更多的顾客)

2. __________________________________ （我想给出关于…的我的建议）holding more activities to call on people ___________________________ (加强他们的环保意识)

3.Ｉput forward this proposal ___________________________ (为了就…发表我的观点) how the work should be done.

4. Here are ____________________________________ (一些建议，希望可以有所帮助)

5. ____________________________________ (考虑到这一问题的严重性)，I want to _________

_________________________________(做出以下提议).

第二段：提出具体建议，并阐述理由

6. I_______________________________________ (建议为学校图书馆增加新电脑以便) more students can have access to the Internet.

7. _____________________________________(我提议的理由是) that the students can’t get enough exercise and that they need to relax themselves.

8. _____________________________________ (我的建议是我们应该) set up an English corner where students can practice their spoken English and ______________________(分享他们的学习英语的经验)

9. _________________________（此外）， many students are not aware of the importance of protecting the environment, ______________________________(因此有必要组织一些活动) to increase their awareness.

10. _________________________ (我建议我们学校创办) a reading club to _________________________ (给学生更多的机会去阅读) so that they can broaden their horizons and increase their interest in reading.

第三段：希望建议被采纳，并表达谢意，盼望回复。

11. _________________________ （感谢你抽出时间阅读我的来信）. I hope my suggestion is constructive and if you have any doubt _________________________ (我们可以进一步讨论) about the details of the proposal.

12. _________________________ (我恳切希望你能认真考虑我的建议) and I’m waiting for _________________________(你能尽快给我答复)

13. I hope you will _________________________(觉得我的建议合理) and _________________________ (我将不胜感激) if you could accept my suggestion.

【展评互学】

Present your writing in front of the class and make an assessment according to the following criteria.

1. 内容完整性

2. 语言准确性

3. 结构合理性

4. 表达得体性

5. 格式规范性

6. 书写工整性

【练习固学】

假定你是李华, 为了让学生参加更多的锻炼，享受校园生活，你向校长写信建议创办一个滑冰社团。内容要求如下：

1. 创办社团的目的; 2. 活动计划（含招新）; 3. 你的期望。

注意:

1. 词数: 80左右; 2. 开头结尾已为你写好, 不计入总词数。 

Dear principal,

My name is Li Hua. I’m writing to apply to start an Ice-skating Club. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Yours,

Li Hua

答案：

第一段

I am writing to offer some thoughts on the further improvement of the hotel so as to attract more customers.

I would like to share my suggestions on holding more activities to call on people to strengthen their environmental awareness.

I put forward this proposal in order to express my views on how the work should be done.

Here are several recommendations that I hope will be of help.

Considering the seriousness of this issue, I want to make the following proposals.

第二段

I suggest installing new computers in the school library so that more students can have access to the Internet.

The reason for my proposal is that students can’t get enough exercise and that they need to relax themselves.

My suggestion is that we should set up an English corner where students can practice their spoken English and share their experience in learning the language.

Moreover, many students are not aware of the importance of protecting the environment; therefore, it is necessary to organize various activities to increase their awareness.

I recommend that our school establish a reading club to give students more opportunities to read so that they can broaden their horizons and increase their interest in reading.

第三段

Thank you for taking the time to read my letter. I hope my suggestions are constructive and if you have any doubt we can discuss the details of the proposal further.

I sincerely hope you will give my recommendations serious consideration and I’m waiting for your prompt reply.

I hope you will find my suggestions reasonable and I would be very grateful if you could accept my suggestion.

Dear Principal,

        My name is Li Hua. I’m writing to apply to start an Ice-skating Club. I believe this club would be a fantastic addition to our school community, providing students with a platform to engage in physical activity in addition to enjoying their campus life.

        The club could organize various activities, such as ice-skating lessons for beginners, practice sessions for more experienced skaters, and even friendly competitions and performances. This would cater to students with different skill levels and interests, fostering a sense of friendship and school spirit.

        I am confident that an ice-skating club would be met with enthusiasm from the students and contribute positively to our school's commitment to promoting a healthy and fulfilling learning environment. Thank you for considering my suggestion.

Yours,

Li Hua