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一、导思： Answer the following question: 1．What do you often do with the Internet? 2．When was the Internet invented? Has it changed over the years? And what do you think it will be used to do in the future ? [文体分析] 调查报告属于应用文的范畴。旨在真实、详细、有条理地将调查结果呈现出来。有关调查报告的书面表达多以图表作文的形式呈现，即要求学生根据要求将图表信息以文字的形式转述出来。 图表式命题作文类似于文字提纲式命题作文，其信息的提供只不过是以图表的形式呈现出来；图表作文是高考书面表达较常见的考查形式之一，要求学生通过对数据、文字内容进行分析，对前后变化、正反观点进行对比，或者对某产品进行介绍，系统而准确地表达出图表所示内容，并得出令人信服的结论，或者分析导致某现象、趋势或问题的原因或可能带来的结果和影响。从体裁看，主要有说明文、议论文和应用文。 写作步骤(三段论) ①开门见山，点明图表要反映的主题。 ②中间段落对图表的内容进行分析，可采用分类或对比来表现主题，并阐明必要的理由。在叙述中切忌反复使用同一句型，忌反复出现图表中的数据。 ③发表自己的观点，对全文进行小结。 [常用表达] 一、开头常用语 ①As is apparently shown in the pie chart/graph/table above...正如上面饼状图/曲线图/表格所明显呈现的…… ②As far as...is concerned，much progress has been made.就……而言，已经取得了很大进步。 ③There is an increase of about...percent，compared with...与……相比较，大约增加了…… ④50% of the people surveyed express the satisfaction with...，while only 40% of them are satisfied with... 在调查中有50%的人对……满意，而仅有40%的人对……满意。 ⑤By comparison with...，it decreased (fell)/increased from...to...和……相比，从……减少/增加到…… ⑥It is obvious from the graph/chart that...rank(s) the first/highest，while...turn(s) out to be the lowest.图中清楚显示……是排在第一位/最高的，而……结果最低。 二、主体部分常用语 ⑦The reason why/for...is that...……的原因是…… ⑧One may think of the change as a result of...人们可能把这种变化认作是……的结果。 ⑨The change in...largely results from the fact that... 在……上的变化很大程度上是由……的事实造成的。 ⑩First/Firstly/To begin with...；Second/Secondly/And then/Next...；Finally/Last but not least/Apart from the above reasons...首先…… ；其次…… ；最后/最后但同样重要的是/除了上述原因…… ⑪It is because of...that...由于……才…… 三、结尾常用语 ⑫in a word总之/in a short简而言之/generally speaking总的说来/to sum up总之，概括地说/in conclusion总之，最后/in summary总之 ⑬From what has been discussed above，we can draw the conclusion that...从以上的讨论我们可以得出结论，…… ⑭Obviously/Apparently，if we want to...，it is necessary to do/that...很明显，如果我们想……，……是有必要的。 ⑮There is no doubt that attention must be paid to...毫无疑问，我们必须注意…… ⑯I suggest the government take effective measures to...我建议政府应该采取有效措施来…… ⑰All in all，it is...that leads to the phenomenon.总而言之，是……导致了这种现象。 二、导学&导练: [写作要求] 某互联网消费调研中心对网络购物进行了调查，调查结果如下。请根据表格所给出的信息描述人们选择网络购物的不同原因，并谈谈你的看法。 注意：1.词数80左右； 2．文章开头已经给出，不计入总词数。 网购吸引用户的几个方面 | 37% | 商品种类丰富 | 33% | 商品价格合理 | 30% | 不受时间、地域限制 |
Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet. The results are as follows. ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________ [审题谋篇] 体裁 | 应用文(图表类调查报告) | 时态 | 一般现在时为主 | 人称 | 第三人称为主 | 框架 | 首段总体介绍调查的内容；第二段针对表格内容进行介绍； 第三段阐述个人看法。 |
[词句推敲] 1．词汇 ①选择网购 choose to shop online ②各种各样的产品 a wide variety of products ③合理的价格 reasonable price ④表达某人的担忧 express one's concerns ⑤占比例 account for ⑥高质量的产品 the products of high quality 2．句式 (1)完成句子 The chart shows the reasons why people choose to shop online. 图表显示了人们选择网上购物的原因。 ②There is a wide variety of products online. 网上有各种各样的产品。 ③Online shopping is very convenient , 网上购物很方便。 ④Consumers can buy what they want anytime or anywhere what they want anytime or anywhere. 消费者可以随时随地购买任何他们想买的东西。 (2)句式升级 ⑤用so...that...句式连接句③和句④ Online shopping is so convenient that consumers can buy what they want anytime and anywhere. [妙笔成篇] Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet. The results are as follows. ___________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Recently, a survey about online shopping has been conducted on the Internet. The results are as follows. The chart shows the reasons why people choose to shop online. Of those surveyed, 37% think there's a wide variety of products in online shops. About one third of them say the reasonable price is most appealing for them.And 30% of them hold that online shopping is so convenient that consumers can buy what they want anytime and anywhere. Personally, even though it is convenient to buy things online, we should make sure the products are of high quality before making a purchase. 请简要描述图片，并结合生活实际(自身或他人的例子)，谈谈你对“舒适圈”的看法。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ [参考范文] Nowadays, many people like to stay in their comfort zone, where there are people and things they are familiar with, and all these can make them feel at ease, helping them gain confidence and satisfaction. However, I think although being stuck in the comfort zone can help us avoid unnecessary challenges, over time, we will have a sense of fear about the world outside the comfort zone, and even find it difficult to adapt to the outside world full of competition. For example, some students lack social skills because they are always stuck in their comfort zone and refuse to make changes, so I think that as young people, we should pick up our courage and bravely jump out of our comfort zone and accept new challenges. Only in this way can we stimulate our potential and create miracles in life. 三、达标导练： I. 单词拼写 1. A high ___________(百分比) of the female staff are part-time workers. 2. The newscast covers topical events and ___________ (娱乐). 3. Today, ___________(移动的)payment is very convenient. 4. What's your ___________(手机) number? 5. These ___________(设备) promise to dramatically change the way we live and work. II. 单句写作 1.人们普遍认为洪水的爆发和砍伐树木有关。(It's generally believed that...) __________________________________________________________________ 2.这家商店里海外进口商品的比重是多少? (What percentage of...?) __________________________________________________________________ 3.寄宿家庭款待了这些交换生。(give an entertainment to sb.) __________________________________________________________________ 4.一部手机在手,各种类型软件可供你下载。(to download) __________________________________________________________________ 5.科考队急需一个破冰设备。(a device to do sth.) __________________________________________________________________ 四、课后巩固训练：（40分钟） 限时练习 五、反思感悟： 1. 你学会使用恰当的语言表达事物的发展和变化过程了吗？ 2. 你能口头描述和书面表达互联网的发展现状和变化过程吗？
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