一、导读：

Key words & expressions involved

1. be _____________ by 受到...的影响   

2. wash _______________ 把...冲走

3. go ________________ 下楼

4. at the ______________ time 与此同时

5. flood _____________ 涌入

6. _____________ saying a single word 一言不发

二、导思：【课文定位】根据语境推测下列单词或者短语的中文意思并且反复诵读

1. Mary was looking through the windows at the endless rain outside.  ________________

2. She had never seen a storm this bad. __________________  

3. The wind roared and the rain beat on the roof and windows.  ______________

4. Dad moved the dinner table against the door, in case the floodwater forced the door open. ______________.

5. Mum waved to Mary to sit on the sofa. ______________

[文体分析]

读后续写的原文词数在350以内；所续写短文的词数应为150左右；多以记叙文或者夹叙夹议类文章为主，故事情节有曲折、有起伏，但是，故事线索的逻辑性比较强。续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。

读后续写特点：

1．读后续写不能随心所欲，是要在开头语和提示词的帮助下完成续写部分。

2．续写的内容应该思路清晰，内容连贯，想象丰富，逻辑性强。

3．读后续写要求读写并重。对文章精准理解才不至于偏离主题。

4．所给文章的未完部分的思路和内容并不一定是唯一的，考生可以根据自己对文章的理解，从而对文章的结尾有不同的诠释。

[常用表达]

三、导学&导练:

[写作要求]

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Once upon a time, there was an old man who couldn't read or write. When he was little, his family was so poor that he couldn't attend school. But he always dreamed of being able to read.

One day, he took his seven­year­old grandson to school.

Since he didn't have anything to do that day, he didn't leave immediately. Instead, he stood outside his grandson's classroom and looked in through the window.

The kids' teacher, who was an old man in his fifties, entered the classroom when the class began. The teacher was wearing thick glasses. He started teaching. Through watching him, the old man found something interesting. He noticed that the teacher could read nothing without putting his glasses on. As soon as he put on his glasses, he could read very well.

“How amazing!” said the old man to himself.

He waited outside the classroom until the class was over and stopped the teacher.

“Excuse me, sir,” said the old man to the teacher.

“Yes?” said the teacher.

“I noticed something amazing. You can't read without the glasses, right?” said the old man.

“Yes, that's true. I can read nothing without them,” replied the teacher.

“But you can read once you put them on, can't you?” asked the old man.

“Yes, that's true, too,” replied the teacher, wondering why the old man was asking such strange questions.

The teacher looked at the old man, who left in a hurry with a big smile on his face.

The old man, who was extremely happy, decided to go to town to find an eyeglasses store. After being unable to read so many years, he finally found an easy way to read, which cheered him up. He realized what he needed to read was just a pair of glasses.

“I can finally read,” said the old man to himself when walking to the town.

Finally, the man arrived at the town. He looked around and soon found a store with glasses in it. The man happily entered the store.

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

After the old man entered the store, the store owner greeted him. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

The store owner, thinking the old man didn't like that pair, picked another pair for him. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

[审题谋篇]

[词句推敲]

1．词汇

①挑选一副眼镜pick a pair of glasses

②戴上那副眼镜put on the pair of glasses

③摇了摇头shake one’s head

④情不自禁笑起来can’t help laughing

⑤失望地离开了这家店leave the store in disappointment

2．句式

(1)完成句子

①The old man nodded while he was looking at the glasses in the store.

老人看着商店里的眼镜，点了点头。

②There were so many glasses that he didn't know which one he would pick.

有这么多副眼镜，他不知道该挑选哪一副。

③The teacher in my grandson's class could read once he wore his glasses.

我的孙子班上的老师一旦戴上眼镜就能读书了。

④But you can't read with the glasses if you can't read at all.

但是，如果你完全不识字，那么戴着眼镜也无法阅读。

(2)句式升级

⑤用省略式状语从句改写句①

The old man nodded while looking at the glasses in the store.

⑥用“疑问词＋to do”的结构改写句②

There were so many glasses that he didn't know which one to pick

[妙笔成篇]

After the old man entered the store, the store owner greeted him. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

The store owner, thinking the old man didn't like that pair, picked another pair for him. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

[参考范文]

After the old man entered the store，the store owner greeted him. “Good morning, sir. May I help you?” asked the store owner. The old man nodded while looking at the glasses in the store. There were so many glasses that he didn't know which one to pick. So he asked the store owner to choose one for him. The store owner gave him a pair of glasses. The old man put it on and took a magazine nearby to read. Then he shook his head.

The store owner, thinking the old man didn't like that pair, picked another pair for him. The old man put it on, tried to read and then shook his head again. It went on and on. Finally, the old man asked. “The teacher in my grandson's class could read once he wore his glasses. Why can't I？” The store owner couldn't help laughing when he heard that. He said, “Sorry, sir. But you can't read with the glasses if you can't read at all.” The old man then left the eyeglasses store in great disappointment.

作文训练

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

Jenny was a bright-eyed, pretty five­year­old girl. One day when she and her mother were checking out at the grocery store, Jenny saw a plastic pearl necklace which was priced at $2.50. How she wanted that necklace, and when she asked her mother if she would buy it for her, her mother said, “Well, it is a pretty necklace, but it costs an awful lot of money. I'll tell you what. I'll buy you the necklace, and when we get home we can make up a list of chores that you can do to pay for the necklace. And don't forget that for your birthday grandma just might give you a whole dollar bill, too. Okay?” Jenny agreed happily, and her mother bought the pearl necklace for her.

Jenny worked on her chores very hard every day, and sure enough, her grandma gave her a brand-new dollar bill for her birthday. Soon Jenny had paid off the pearls. How Jenny loved those pearls! She wore them everywhere to kindergarten, bed and even when she went out with her mother to run errands.

The only time she didn't wear them was in the shower, because her mother had told her that they would turn her neck green!

Jenny had a very loving Daddy. When Jenny went to bed, he would get up from his favorite chair every night and read Jenny her favorite story.

One night when he finished the story, he asked Jenny, “Hey, sweetie, do you love me?”

“Oh yes, Daddy, you know I love you,” the little girl said with a warm smile.

“Well, then, give me your pearls.”

“Oh! Daddy, not my pearls!” Jenny refused. “But you can have Rosy, my favorite doll. Remember her? You gave her to me last year for my birthday. And you can have her tea party outfit(全套服装), too. Okay?”

“Oh no, darling, that's okay.” Her father brushed her cheek with a kiss. “Good night, little one.”

注意：续写词数应为150左右。

A week later, Jenny's father once again asked Jenny the same question after her story, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

Another week later, when her father came in to read her a story as usual, __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

[参考范文]

A week later，Jenny's father once again asked Jenny the same question after her story, “Do you love me？” Jenny gave a definite answer to this question without hesitation. But when the conversation came to whether she could give her pearls to her father, she refused a second time.

Another week later, when her father came in to read her a story as usual, Jenny was sitting on her bed and her lip was trembling. “Here, Daddy,” she said, and held out her hand. Inside of her hand was her beloved plastic pearl necklace. She let it slip into her father's hand. At this time, her father pulled out of his pocket a blue velvet box, and some real, genuine, beautiful pearls were just inside. He had had them all along. He was waiting for Jenny to give up the cheap stuff so he could give her the real thing. Sometimes, life is just like this：Give up one thing and get another chance to receive a better thing.

四、达标导练:

I. 单句语法填空

1. He is old enough _______________ (live) independently.

2. Car manufacturers have been accused of _____________ (flood) the market with cheap cars.

3. She gave him a ________________ (shock) look.

4. It _______________ (scare) me to think I was alone in the building at night.

5. Never before has our country been so ______________ (power) as it is today.

6. The students were _______________ (curiosity) about the people who lived upstairs.

7. _______________ we all know, vocabulary is an important part of language, just like bricks of a building.

8. Tom works hard and he is always the last one ____________ (leave) the classroom every day.

9. One of the ____________ (document) lost by accident was a report written by the engineer.

10. What worried us was that ______________ (supply) of food were almost exhausted.

II. 用方框内短语的适当形式填空

1. I _______________ today’s newspaper but I found nothing important.

2. The brave girl never gave up but ______________ overcome the difficulty in life.

3. I’d be very grateful if you could take some time to my _____________ resume and make necessary changes.

4. This is a great place for camping but you have to ______________ snakes.

5. My car broke down on the way to the beach because it had ______________ petrol.

6. You may think of giving up the plan _______________ just think it over before making the decision.

7. The town was cut off from the rest of the world ______________ heavy snow.

8. This plan shows us what we should do in every step ______________.

9. Imagine your home begins to shake and you must leave it _________________.

III. 完成句子

1. 她是第一个在奥运会上获得金牌的女性。

She was ___________ __________ __________ __________ __________ the gold medal in the Olympic Games.

2. 杰克是我们班唯一一个毕业后出国的学生。

Jack is __________ ___________ ___________【打印本页】【关闭窗口】